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Life wasn’t short enough for her
So she took her own life
She cried out in pain
Disgusted by some invisible shame
She hated the way she looked
She hated the way that she hated
No one knew her
Her face was vacant and shaded
She thought no one would forget her
She hoped this was the way
No matter how much I begged
No one could make her stay
She took her like because no one cared
But it was her
The emotions she failed to share
I tried to help her
But she didn’t want it
She’d rather end it small
She hated me
She hated all
How could this be?
She wouldn’t even listen to me
She thought the world ended every single day
For herself to pass and die
Is what she always prayed
Now she is gone
One more forgotten soul
My best friend left me
Suicide took its toll…..
So she took her own life
She cried out in pain
Disgusted by some invisible shame
She hated the way she looked
She hated the way that she hated
No one knew her
Her face was vacant and shaded
She thought no one would forget her
She hoped this was the way
No matter how much I begged
No one could make her stay
She took her like because no one cared
But it was her
The emotions she failed to share
I tried to help her
But she didn’t want it
She’d rather end it small
She hated me
She hated all
How could this be?
She wouldn’t even listen to me
She thought the world ended every single day
For herself to pass and die
Is what she always prayed
Now she is gone
One more forgotten soul
My best friend left me
Suicide took its toll…..
Literature
Suicide
Bare wrists
Knife in hand.
Closed fists
Tears land..
Time stops.
Thoughts flow.
Knife drops.
Don't go.
Literature
Suicide
You called me up,
crying,
down the phone,
you said you'd taken some pills,
and didn't want, to die alone.
Is your life,
that messed up,
you had to take steps,
to make it stop?
I cried to you,
to call 999,
you said you couldn't listen,
to voices other than mine.
your voice sounded weak,
fighting for breath,
the silence was noticeable
as if i was deaf.
The streets of heaven,
are already full tonight,
full of souls,
souls of angels,
souls like yours,
souls of people,
whose life ended too soon.
Your death,
has brought nothing but pain,
upon this world.
Literature
The Suicide
I saw your pain,
and yet I did not try to fix it.
I saw the tears,
and yet I could not dry them.
You talked of your troubles,
and yet I gave no time to listen.
I feel as though I could have saved you, now.
I made no effort at all.
I feel as though I added to your anguish.
I wanted to help, but I didn't know what to do.
I cannot imagine the pain you must have been in,
forgive me for not seeing.
Oh, God, I don't know why I couldn't see!
Blinded by my own petty distractions and excuses
Too busy to save you...
I am so sorry, Dan,
And I pray that you're in heaven as I pray for forgiveness.
Please know that I cried for you once i
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Well this really makes no sense to me but its like for someone close to me. in the future if this was to ever happen. which I hope it doesn't ever happen to anyone I know that is close to me. but I just had the emotion to write about suicide today so whatever, screw you if you don't like it cause I did.
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My best friend attempted suicide, i was thinking about drawing some picture or something.